Black Poetry : Love Talks

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  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love spoke to me and said,
    "Lay your troubles down."
    lay them to the left of your being
    and to the right of your mind
    which is sound.
    Love spoke to me and said,
    "Give me your heartaches, and
    give me your pain.
    Because in troubled waters I will
    touch you and you shall be changed."
    Love spoke in a gentle whisper that
    penetrated my being with the sound of
    thunder.
    I inclined my ear and Love spoke again.
    "Honey, give me your sorrows and your
    greatest fears; and I'll give you tomorrow for
    all your tears and make all of this disappear."
    I was speechless and for a moment
    I was sure I was in the wrong existence,
    until love stepped closer and loved me future,
    present and past tense.
    Love edified and revitalized,
    re-birthing and creating,
    re-defining and shaping me into
    an entity that thrived on compassion
    and peace.
    Love spoke to me, and we merged into one,
    destroying the loneliness and commanding
    the heartache's and pains to cease.


    Copyright 2004 A.D/ "HyeKlass Publishing"
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    Love spoke to me, and we merged into one,
    destroying the loneliness and commanding
    the heartache's and pains to cease.

    Simply Beautiful........
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    from beginning to end...
    love spoke to me...through you..
    it was wonderful..rich in imagery and emotions
    thank you for sharing ....
     
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    love talks
    wow
    loving your scribes:)
    wonderful pleasure
    reading your flows
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    love talkin i say
    this was a tight piece enjoyed
    from top to bottom
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when love talks i listen this was awesome tyte
    keep it coming ya words dance off the page
     
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    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all. I'm loving each of you. Be blessed.
     
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