Black Poetry : Love Surrounds Me!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm so glad my lover know's me, the true me, the real me!
    And his love surrounds me, astounds me!
    Protects me and respects me...
    Love surrounds me...abounds me!
    Abides in me...
    When I was blinded, Love made me see!
    When I was chained by apathy love free'd me!

    I'm so glad God blessed me, with a passionate me.
    I will always be, the real me, the true me.
    And his love surrounds me, astounds me!
    Protects me and respects me...
    Love surrounds me and abounds me!
    Abides in me...
    When I was lost , love found me.
    When I was proud love humbled me!

    I'm so glad Love surrounds me, the true me, the real me!
    And my love surrounds me, astounds me!
    Protects me and respects me...
    Abides in me..
    When I grow tired, love energizes me, invigorates me!
    When I feel overwhelmed love calms me, sedates me!
    Elates me!
    Love
    Surrounds
    Me!
    And I' m so glad my lover knows the real me, the true me.
    And
    his
    Love
    surrounds ME!
    *TO ENC with much Love
    BJS(C)2003:love:
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a very nice flow indeed. love does that to you and it's a great thang to have that feeling returned.



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  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gurl dis was awesome i love how dis unfold
    keep da ink droppin'
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsB

    This is a beautiful piece!


    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love has the power to do alot. Doesn't it? Nice flow.
     
  6. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the response!

    Thank you so much for reading this was produced even while underfire from the "Evil forces" hahahahahah! I know this concept to be true.

    Blessings ON Ya House!
     
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    Hey sista, i really liked this poem. Showin love once again to my best friend on here. Keep it up girl:)

    Aaliyahmonet:)
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now girl that is some love you got there..........................
    hold it close sista!
     
  9. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LiberyLiada and my fellow scribes, you do inspire a positive vibe!

    This is one I would have written Valentines Day or not, I thank you for supporting my humble efforts..."Ain't love Grande?"

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    Powerful force..."Love."

    Ain't it grand?
    "yes it is"
    nice piece, MsLB.

    Thanx for sharing.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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