Black Poetry : Love Surrenders

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You turned about to be even more than my
    Heart and soul could have ever imagine
    And all the emotions you have stirred inside of me
    Keeping me constantly on my feet
    Never knew your love would feel this good to me

    Yes, Im always thinkn’ bout you
    Day or nite, morning or noon
    Smiles trace my face from thoughts of you
    Can’t wait to taste your lips
    Drown myself in your kiss
    You are the one I miss
    Baby let me tell you this….

    Never knew your love would feel this good to me
    You’re my living and breathing fantasy
    I’m caught up in your rapture
    Wanna grow old with you and live
    Happily ever after
    scribe memories of your love
    Chapter after chapter

    Have I told you
    How u light up my world
    Oh, yes you do
    Can’t stand the thought of not
    Sharing my love with you
    And how you do that sexy thing you do
    That sets my body on fiyah
    Creating extreme desire
    Taking me higher and higher
    You know Im not a liar
    Nothing but truth I shall speak
    You make my body weak
    I’m feeln’ every degree of your heat
    wanna melt all over you
    beneath these sheets

    Never knew your love would feel this good to me
    No sense in trying to ignore it
    I surrender…..
     
  2. Pi5Fs

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    this is beautiful ma
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When they consume both our hearts and minds...it's time to surrender.
    Love is a beautiful thing to surrender too, I enjoyed greatly the vibes all through this piece. I loved it...thanks for sharing.
     
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    When something this good captivates your heart and soul, how could one not surrender to it. Enjoyed the rhyme scheme, and loving the endearing sentiment felt.
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pi5Fs:
    Your words of kindness are
    greatly appreciated.



    queen & watz:
    I can never tell you both how
    much your words of support and
    praise moves me. I only hope
    that one day my pen will flo
    as eloquently and beautifully
    as yours do. Thank you both
    so much.


    Much Luv
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dang girl

    all i can say is wow
    wish i was there

    lol

    peace
     
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