Black Poetry : "Love Songs"

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  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tina told me to ask
    What's Love go to do with it?
    And Lord knows me and all these Hot Boys
    Just want to see you Back that Thang Up!
    And yes it true I need a Girlfriend
    But you and your girlfriend Jennifer
    Want to ask those crazy questions
    Like If you had my Love?
    So my response is
    I belong to you every time I see your face and
    I whispered in your ears
    Baby, Baby, Baby
    Why all of sudden your eyes started Talking to me
    And I became Mesmerized
    So lets be real about this
    Tell your freind Kelly to look the other way
    Cause now, I'm feeling on your booty.
    I don't really care anymore, so let's be foolish
    And give birth to just that,
    Another Crazy Love
    Wake up The Morning After
    Succumb to the Ex-Factor
    Is this Sexual healing?
    Am I the Loverboy?
    Must be cause girl know you got me twisted
    Even you're telling all your girlfriends
    The boy is mine
    and the fellas are teasing me saying,
    You got it bad!
    But Love overcomes all
    And ours too is Beautiful, I just want you to know
    But it seems the other day you had confided in Tyrese
    Cause you had the nerves to ask me
    What have I done for you lately?
    Screaming out There's a stranger in my house!
    Do I have to exclaim for the fifteenth time
    Billy Jean is not my Lover!
    I should have known you'd fall for that punk Avant too
    Cause just like that
    We're suddenly Seperated
    And now I'm standing here looking stupid for another Seven Days Like Craig David wondering can you fill me in
    But it's all too late
    cause even my best friend Justin says your Gone.
    I guess I'll just Cry me a River
    Since all I'm left with is P Diddy and a busted *** on this highway of love.
    By tommorrow who knows,
    I'll probably be singing, I'll Be Missing You!
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed the creative way you incorporated the songs and singers. I like quite a few of these. Do flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop and smooth singing
     
  4. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could never think about?U are really...a creative person!!!!I'll try to do like u and make a rap!
    Peace
     
  5. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow hope to read more
     
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    lilcutie Active Member MEMBER

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    Nice wirte. Do your thing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this one still bring sweet treats love how it was done had to visit again
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really creative, I enjoyed it!
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was real nice
    I like it
     
  10. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to all the fam at destee for yaw'll great comments!
    Thanks one mo gin.
     
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