Quiet Poetry Lounge : LOVE songs

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  1. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was really bored so I thought that I'd write a poem using dif. lyrics from did. love songs...lol....enjoy!!!


    ~LoVe Songs~​


    There are so many words I can use to describe you “Here I go, I know you heard me say it time and time again”
    “You inspire me to be better; you challenge me for the better. Sit back and let me pull out
    My love letter” “I can’t wait to get to school each day”
    “Every time that I am with you ‘boy’, can’t believe you changed my world”, and
    “Don’t let any one change your mind, cause they don’t know how much I care, and they don’t know the things we share, unless they hear it babe”

    But, “I think we could get to know each other better if we turn the lights off”
    Is what you said, but “I’m not that kind of girl” and you say
    “Now you wanna be free, so I let you fly” “It’s killin me sof-
    Ly” “If you’re determined to leave boy I will not stand in your way

    “I try so very hard to make you understand”, see
    “All my girls who hear me, say ‘Oh yeah!’”
    My mama told me, “You ain’t seen nothing if you ain’t had lovin from one of them country boys”, man
    I should’ve listened to her, but “I can’t blame you if you want to leave, cause I’m not the girl the I use to be” before you go just listen to me

    Call me crazy,
    But “Before I let you go away, can I get a kiss goodnight….baby?”​
     
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    this was very beautiful..................nice flow
     
  3. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww thanks rich....it seems like you are the only one who liked it...lol....but i appreciate it....cool :) someone likes my work!!!!
     
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    I like it too. I like the BlackStreet ending. Very creative.
     
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    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank YOU soooooooo much HODEE....that was very nice of you :)
    I appreciate it
     
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    You know I wrote something similar a while back. It had the same title too. I guess this some crazy coincidence. Anyways I like your style and that last song you picked was a great ending! I'll have to post my version when I get a chance. Peace
     
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    yeah you should do that i would love to read it....thanks i appreciate the love you guys....:)
     
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    I liked the way you strung the lyrics together. Keep those flows coming poet.
     
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