Black Poetry : Love Songs Unheard

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's the kind of music
    that gives everyone a knowing smile
    Thoughts of cuddling with your sweetie
    Romancing them in smooth sultry style
    I try not to listen
    in vain
    Pleasurable as the music is
    the final note is one of pain
    Inevitably, my thoughts
    of course
    turn to you
    and what I would do
    if only

    My reflection within your eyes
    is what I long to see
    me looking at you
    and you looking at me
    Such a breathtaking portrait
    our first mutual eye contact
    Eyes sparkling, pupils dilating
    Oh, to paint such a visionary act
    I would color you, forever

    And then we
    would talk
    We would talk day into night
    Discuss everything that's right
    Discuss what we've felt, and still feel
    and how each metaphysical wave of love
    is real
    That electrical charge would only increase
    when the temptation of lips causes
    auditory communication to cease

    Yet our mouths would continue to speak
    tasting the honeydew sweetness
    savoring the moistness of lips
    sampling lobes, shoulders, fingertips
    and why in the world we waited
    this long, oh so long...
    I'm thinking
    as I'm caught up in this song
    Caught up in just another daydream
    Daydream number 356, this year
    9 more to go, a pity, still unrealized
    Unrealized because of stagnant fear
    Which is why my dear
    I sometimes try hard not hear
    love songs....
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    lol

    where are you going with this

    sista i forgot yo name?

    hmmmmmmmm?

    you're speaking and as you're speaking you taste honeydew?

    very interesting sista

    very interesting

    hahahhahahahahahahaha
     
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    Watzainaname, you right on point with this...I feel your every word...Thank goodness...only 9 more daydreaming days left in this year...then we start all over again!!!!!! Tight flow!
     
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    Beautiful write. I feel you on this. Lovely write I enjoyed reading it.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja, you've never heard of speaking without words? I guess my name isn't the only thing you've forgotten. Hahahahaha
    Thank you for letting me know you felt every word, HopelisRomantic. Much appreciated.
    Glad you enjoyed reading this piece FattnBeautiful, thank you.
     
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    Wow...
    What a wonderful trip down the lane of love, still taking the trips.
    And the sweetest part of this is ...I still love to sing those love songs.
    Thanks for this awesome piece poet ...^5
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a sweet response sister queent. Thank you for the luv you give.
     
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