Black Poetry : Love Song

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you maintain
    This sweet refrain
    Without any strain
    Is this note within your domain
    Can you hold it and not complain

    Is this an octave you can withstand
    Is this a genre you feel and understand
    My love is like no other song
    It must be sung really strong
    Midway through you can't go flat
    Or sceech like a angry cat

    Every note has to ring true
    For my love song is sweet and pure
    So again I ask can you endure
    Will the melody be on point for sure

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was expressed so beautifully and in good will
    surely that very one will sing it in high notes where
    love abids ...tyte write poet.
     
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