Quiet Poetry Lounge : Love Song

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Nov 25, 2003.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words transport to another level,
    Music takes me even higher,
    Shocks me like a live wire
    As if it speaks for the words,
    By itself.
    And the constant reminder is by myself,
    As I listen to what is, was, and what would like to be done,
    To some girl who has been given the promise,
    That she won’t ever be alone.
    Sweet is the thought that takes over me,
    Only cause I have yet to see it done for me.
    But do I actually want the regurgitated,
    Restated, recited,
    Lines that once ignited someone else’s flame,
    And gained the name of ‘Our song’?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin ya flow wow tyte
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    But do I actually want the regurgitated,
    Restated, recited,
    Lines that once ignited someone else’s flame,
    And gained the name of ‘Our song’?

    A million times no. An original woman needs an original love. very nice.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this flow...please share more...:angel1:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    our song
    this bring nice thoughts to mind
    wonderful flow
    very nice indeed
    Peace
     
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