Black Poetry : Love so deep I'll follow you into Afterlyfe.....

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby we talk about how deeply we feel
    And I know its not a in heat of the moment its real
    I feel like our lyfe is like a movie played upon them old-fashioned reel

    As me the daring Actress strolled in to your lyfe
    Didn't know that down the road our bond would be so tyte

    You the dashing actor with you fine suit on came by
    And I was so fascinated that you took my breathe away with a smile

    Setting 1930's and the streetz were quiet
    Not even a stir or a riot

    Came up and touch my curlz
    And the moment send me into a uncontrollable whurl

    I was so blown by your prescence
    I was already wondering what that birthday present

    Look like
    If I could take a byte

    Of your sweet surprise
    Already thinking nasty thoughts got my thighz

    Wanting to wrap your world
    I knew in a instant that I wanted to be your gurl

    Then you lean over and said" Whats a pretty thang like you doing alone"
    Is your home

    Near by
    And I simply reply

    Its just two blocks
    And them durty thoughtz

    Just came
    I came

    To do something I have never done before
    His style had me wanting more

    As we walked It seem like time stood still
    And in a instant we both saw the prescence of the steel

    One minute he was beside me
    I was completely

    Shock
    The blood wouldn't stop

    As I said, What is this how can this be?
    You didn't get a chance to know me

    I didn't get a chance to be your wyfe or have your kids
    I softly bent down to kiss his lips

    And he stroke my hair
    And I'm thinking this isn't fair
    Those gangstas' didn't care
    Didn't want me to share

    With this man only a woman could give
    Now he's about to die I didn't want to live

    But he said Love I will be waiting for you
    And the tears pouring what should I do

    I'll be there at the gates
    Dont make me wait

    He closed his eyes
    As he hands fell from my thighz

    I whispered to him

    Love so deep I'll follow you into Afterlyfe!!!!!!!!

    To be continued...........​
    :bye: :bye:
     
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    whoa.....he got u like dat
    them feelings and thoughts getting heated
    making me wanna u know ........next pt.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that's some real love!!!!!!
    Siply beautifyl, Nevar.
     
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    Okay nevar, you've got me wondering. Come on now poet, don't keep us waiting...what happens next?
     
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    Nice flo Nevar. I am really feeln' this title.
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to all who have replied. your love is greatly appreciated!
     
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    i waz feelin this deep rite, so real, so nice, that this poem had my eyes frozen like ice...lol..naw let me stop tryin 2 rhyme, but this really is a great drop...so keep doin yo thang my sista ..n i cant wait for the next one

    blackluv and bp
     
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    thanks for the love given part two will follow1:hearts1:
     
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    That's deep. He'll make you feel that way. So much love inside, you just know as you walk, people can hear it swishing in your shoes.


    Come on with part two. much love
     
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    :heart: :great: That's deep. He'll make you feel that way. So much love inside, you just know as you walk, people can hear it swishing in your shoes.


    Come on with part two. much love
     
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