Black Poetry : Love short 1

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wading in waters
    toes tickling stones
    you have placed to massage
    my aching feet
    you know the journey
    I've travelled
    chaotic chaos mental
    mind drained I'm tired
    when I'm done pleasing my
    soles...I'll come
    running into your arms
    just....
    hold
    me tight.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB.....

    i don't know how you do it... but don't stop! :)

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stop stumbling over those tired feet...

    I'll catch you if I can!!
    Definitely another great -
    Blakverb Creation!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    outstanding scribe bruh !
     
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    Hi Brother Blk
    In your journey
    come home:)
    Very deep ..very deep

    Peace
     
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    To have that one just waiting to embrace you, I smile just at the thought of that, wonderful piece.
     
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