Black Poetry : Love Senses

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    S~I~G~H~T

    Watching you with polite eyes,
    I stare in hopeless admiration
    at what my sight beholds;
    beautiful delicacy oh so real
    surely a sight for sore eyes

    S~O~U~N~D

    With those same eyes, I close
    them tightly so that I may
    hear what my mind tells me
    in words that sound with truth;
    hear her heart beating just for you

    S~M~E~L~L

    Soothingly sensitive to my
    flared nostrils; so wide open
    with passion to smell of your
    femininely matured grace deep
    within my mental

    T~A~S~T~E

    In my loving state of mind
    I forever yearn to sample your
    tenderness; to lavish in your flavored
    joy; tasting you hungrily within my soul

    T~O~U~C~H

    The mother of all caresses reserved for
    my hands to bestow upon you with
    my manly charm; touching you firmly
    but with gentle regard for your soft delicacy

    When these senses combine, you will know
    that

    to see you
    is a passion of mine

    to hear you
    call my name is heavenly bliss

    to smell you
    is like the sweetest ecstasy

    to taste you
    satisfies the desire in me

    and

    to touch you
    just sends me there…

    ©GQINC2K2​
     
  2. mensahpoetic

    mensahpoetic Active Member MEMBER

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    I like the creative way you've conveyed the 5 senses in relation to experiencing that woman which makes you feel so many things...

    I thoroughly enjoyed this piece...

    thank you for sharing it...
     
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    Nice!

    Tyte Read GQ!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man GQ dis be off da hook in the high 5 wayz
    work dem keyz brutha
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mensah, Shad, $R,

    It's that time; nahimean????

    Thanks for reading....

    :peace:
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  6. GA_Sunshyne

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    bighead.


    mmm mmm mmm... you's a mess! :)

    but! i loved the way this piece got
    all 5 of my senses open w i d e.

    :heart:,
    elayne.
     
  7. epiphany

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    GQ..
    I likes this....delightfully sweet!

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifully flo'd
    I love the title.


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    this is a helluva lot betta than Tasty Cakes fo sho!!!!!! You still got it baby:D



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