Black Poetry : Love Rocs

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Mar 21, 2007.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep thoughts
    And intertwined with inspiration
    Since the day we begun

    It's been like true luv
    Real sensation

    Catipult through the mind of ones eye
    True lines
    since like we can't deny

    So they call it, cypher

    But its spiritual, he was like, yo that kid,
    I like her

    Travelin
    Subliminal
    True love

    It's for everyone
    Through love one
    Reciprical

    Can't fade
    Forever young
    So broke heart
    Becomes hospitable

    Still
    Breathin life
    Feeling drums race blood
    Lyrical

    Veins poison
    Poetical

    Open tha door
    Close shut

    I learned a new way
    They been called freestyleyrical

    Be the heart, soul, and mind
    Chemical

    Kids adjacent
    Decent rhyme
    Pivotal

    Took the train
    We zoned in
    East meets west
    Hour we knew,
    It wasn't physical

    To Chicago, Brooklyn,
    Cali~Bay~ then Sacramental

    Be it
    So visual

    Times erase hate
    Delayed love
    Was rape

    God, thank you for tha kid
    That could not appreciate

    I see fate
    Deeper than outward beauty
    Is the heart
    Not the booty

    Is the smart
    Not just the cutey

    Is the art
    Tis' the duty

    Obligated
    Be the rules in the book
    Yo' it character
    Unshook

    Words
    Methodoligy
    Swords
    Fire in flames

    Burn a branded
    100%
    Raw
    Redemption
    Prevade

    It's luv
    One
    It's luv
    One
    It's Luv
    One

    Not of this world
    But memory stained
    Flowing like a brook

    Mercy flow
    Mercy throw

    Anonymous
    Neva

    Desert Storm

    Lift voices
    Amplified
    Holy matrimony
    Communion

    Flow

    Like the Word

    Get ya Flow On...

    Like

    Ya 'Heard.
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey I'm so glad to have been the first to comment on this powerful piece. Keep flowing poet! me likes very much and I heard ya, ya know!
     
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    Wow D Storm, good to see you back around these parts. You waltzed in and set the poetry forum ablaze:flame:

    Creative piece, I can imagine this in spoken word:spinstar:

    :read:

    :picture:
     
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    Word I'm loving his form and his wordplay


    Really looking for more from you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome drop this was blazzin like wild fire ......D.Storm in da house
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a smooth flowing rhythm to this piece, yes, one love is beyond physical. Welcome back. Much enjoyed.
     
  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bLeSsInGs, BlEsSiNgS!

    bLESSINGS,

    Nevar, how you be? Sis, I haven't seen ya for a while. THanks for stopping by to say, hello.

    Spicy, good to see you, how ya been? thanks for stopping by the poetry flowz.

    Doryea- Thanks sis, glad you were inspired. trully and sincerely, D.S.

    Rich,- yea, thanks, good to see ya blessing tha flowz

    Whatsinaname-yes, missed you all, thanks for stopping by!

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    Y'all come back now!

    Desert Storm
     
  8. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i must say....definitely was feeling this one :)
     
  9. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mspoetic

    Thanks for stopping by.
    I'm glad you liked the flowz.

    One
    and
    Sincerely,
    D.s.
     
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