Black Poetry : Love revisited .... Part I

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  1. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i kissed you tenderly
    i listened for my name
    i looked into your eyes
    i'm in love, do you feel the same?

    i caressed your fingers
    i massaged your back
    i rubbed your pain away
    just touching you baby, ain't enough

    the way you walk in the room
    the smell of your cologne
    the way you look at me
    looking at you, looking at me

    touch me gently
    blessing our love
    giving me sweet dreams
    lessons learned in love

    the makings of a relationship
    once torn to shreds
    gathered by memories
    mostly in my head

    i want you more than i did back then
    i hear you calling my name, from within
    being gentle and loving while i heal
    understanding the way i feel

    hoping one day we'll share one name
    leaving behind all past pains
    taking our love past hater zone
    waiting again to hear you moan ...

    Part II soon to follow ....
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice drop
    keep them coming poet.
     
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    Thanks for sharing this piece poet.
     
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    Seems as though this could be the start of as they say "something big". You've drawn me in, now I'm interested in what happens next. Awaiting part 2.
     
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    tyte drop enjoyed the flava of ya flow
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If it's worth having, ...then it's worth the effort to make it be, spill it :puke: ...I'm sure he's listening.
     
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    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh EAGERLY awaiting part II :read: :)
     
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    still on the rise ..............Love revist angain bring on pt.2
     
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    re:Love

    Very nice.
     
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