Black Poetry : love reign down

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  1. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue skies cry
    bitter golden tears
    that create vibrant sheer rainbows
    that galavant across the horizon
    to come and revere and parade before me
    and he...
    some solicitous sorcerer
    that manifested from these promiscuous prisms---
    dallies before me
    and seduces me with his smile.
    I merely gaze at him...
    enraptured by his beauty
    and mesemerized by the low hum
    that vibrates from him
    as he dares to glide closer
    and kiss me with his fingers
    on my eyelids
    and bombard my mind with visions
    too confusing and duplicitous to be deciphered
    in the rapid flashes that they advance.
    He left me limp and breathless...
    his stance akimbo and proud
    as he watches the emotions tumble around inside of me
    some sort of loquacious love lottery
    that he seems to be hoping to strike---
    but I resist.
    Impressed, again he smiles,
    proud of the reaction that pounces from me
    as I sit up straight and hold my ground
    scoffing at his outstretched hand.
    "Who do you think you are?" I laugh.
    "I am Love," his motionless lips whisper,
    "I came from your midnight prayers to the stars and darkness.
    I want for you to follow me now...for I am ready...
    yes...come with me now...or I will never come again."
    I stare square into Love's eyes and reply,
    "Yes...I know you well. Have yearned for you constantly.
    Cried for you often. And never did you answer my plea.
    Now you come...knowing I am not ready...knowing that you are unwanted...
    making demands to bend and break me to your making.
    But you will not.
    Leave me be, Love. Come back when I am ready...
    if not...then very well forget me...
    I will find another master to fall in awe of."
    Brightly, he smiles, confounding the hell out of me
    as he steps forward and kisses my lips.
    "So be it..."
    Before he explodes into crystal raindrops
    he swishes across my neck and says,
    "I will return"
    I smile and continue to watch my parade...
    catagorizing my priorities, prioritizing my dreams,
    silently anticipating
    my Love's
    return.
    © copyright ambroziya snow2001
    all rights reserved



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  2. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have been measured...

    ...>fades in>

    I bow to you on this one. As always the words come together and reflect the emotion in your soul.
    Do you still doubt your ability?
    Do you think this piece could have been born without talent and a sense of direction, and most of all..heart?

    Remember what I told you...even if no one hears you, write. Not for acceptance, or praise but for the expression and salvation of your own heart and mind. Once you do, somewhere out there, someone will hear you, feel you and see you. And for that one person, your words may be the inspiration or assurance that they seek. And that my friend is the hope of a poet.
    One other thing...
    Just as the reader often lose him/herself within a poet's words, so does the poet, often find him/herself within their very own words.
    So let the search begin.
    And one day when your words have blazed a trail from the bottomless abyss of your soul to the highest peaks of emotional bliss and back again, I shall be the first to tell you, as I am now...that it is not the words but the expression behind the words that give them their power. Just as it is not the words but the expression of those words that make you a poet.

    Believe, without a doubt, and it shall be.

    Always, your fan and friend.

    <fades out of sight<...
     
  3. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the Spirit moves me.....

    ....and in all my soul searching and wanderings down the paths i have taken in my mind...i come across the one road that i just happened to travel upon and at the end of it....

    i found you...
    or you found me....
    or we found each other....

    however whichever whatever.....
    none of it matters at all....
    all that matters is that you are out there...
    somewhere...
    thinking of me
    as i think of you
    and from the bottom of my dank and sorrowfull soul
    i thank you for your kind words and your unselfish inspiration...
    for staying up into the wee hours of the morn and listen to my heart wail without complaining....never complaining....
    but most of all....thank you for being a part of my life and letting me have a small walk on roll in yours....
    :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

    you'll never know what you've said means to me....
    no...you'll never be able to comprehend what it means to me at all

    thank you legend:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

    mad love always....

    da :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: GODDESS SUPREME


    *kissing the wind and embracing the sky*
     
  4. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    for da kind words hun!



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  5. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS CINDY....

    got me speechless!! :)


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