Black Poetry : Love Rain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Hunter, Jul 18, 2001.

  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby...

    It's been such a long time
    Such a long time

    Since I've been
    Beautiful
    In another man's eyes

    So
    When you looked at me
    With those hungry eyes
    And said

    "You look good in red"

    I dreamed of
    Us

    And together
    We were
    Color

    Baby...

    It's been such a long time
    Such a long time

    Since my belly dance
    Has left men feeling
    Hypnotized

    So when I
    Swayed
    My left thigh
    To the flicker of
    Candle lights

    Jasmine scented incense
    Led the path
    To your pain

    I soothed your
    Troubled hair-line
    With the moisture
    Of my own
    Nervous palm

    And
    Naked for the first time
    Together

    We sheltered ourselves
    Under the love umbrella

    And washed ourselves

    In the rain...


    *Liquid Flows*

    Hunter
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  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter, Lady!!!

    This waterfall is........exquisite! My sista, and everything we experience has its purpose....and the virtue of patience rewards us with everything else our hearts desire. After all.

    Beautiful Miss Hunter! Inspired! Divine!

    a
     
  3. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!! this is beautiful. Much respect for your work Hunter. Drop in more often.

    BE
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter....


    aight now sis... what's up with this fascination
    wit bein' wet??!! (LOL)

    seriously though... you know how i feel about
    your flowz... they all tyght to death!! :)

    One.
    SunShyne~
     
  5. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Piece

    Liquid Flows...you got dhat one right. I'm diggin this....
     
  6. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    delicious...
    such a wonderful feeling of
    this new butterfly stomach love...
    thanks for reminding me
    and for sharing.
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!

    U GOT ME MESMERIZED IN YO ESSENCE
    UMMMMM!! HUMMMMM!! U SHO NUFF DO
    I LOVE THE PART ABOUT COLOR ((RED))
    SEE I LOVE A WOMAN IN RED MY FLAVA...WHOA!:heart:
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    HUNTER

    GO ON WIT YO' BAD SELF
    you had me ready to jump through the screen girl

    this is that shhhhh

    Peace


    <DSS>
     
  9. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter

    how I love to get sopping wet in a love/rain shower!

    go'n girl! :wink:

    T
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter,

    nice...smooth...loving this piece mos' def'....question and since you're from Canada I'm sure you can answer this, when is Carabana? I was thinking about checking it out.

    blak
     
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