Black Poetry : Love Prevails

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  1. BLASTHEME

    BLASTHEME Active Member MEMBER

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    Love Prevails Scene 1 Phase 2-4 Tha Saga Begins



    Eye contact between the two of us ran wild for some minutes

    The outer appearance was calm but the inner emotions were anything but timid

    She spoke a new language with her body talk I comprehended

    Images in my mind took me from the present second to her being my chosen intended

    What was this?!... Vibe? Lust?!...Love!?...Fantasy?! or Fascination!?

    She appeared to be the perfect persona of passion for my realization

    I spoke my greeting in saying "Hello" and "My name is…"

    My looking into her eyes had me lost as she pondered if I was name-less

    Finally realizing that I had suspended the part of mentioning my name

    I said they call me BlasTheme, "And, No Baby, It Isn't Uh Game!"

    Her look was subtle in saying that it was nice to meet me

    Her soft snuggable hug made it truly known it was nice to meet me

    I asked where she was from and she said some far off place

    Her smile like shimmering ice as I smelled her aroma and could almost taste

    She was pecan brown with a hint of jasmine in her effervescence

    Smiling eyes serious pout and a demeanor that spoke "no nonsense"

    When asked what she was doing for the rest of her life

    She stated she wasn't for sure what it as, but that it did include being my wife

    Our thoughts in synergy as we created our universe

    She was mine, I was hers, no drama, no act and nothing to rehearse

    Together we gave birth to unity, compassion and love

    In her eyes were the stars so I had no need to look above

    She was the highest high as far as love would have us seek and search

    No library, bar, club, market, chat room, bus station, park, or church

    Could ever possess the beauty in which I found in her

    Call cupid if you will, and even he will confer

    Our hearts pointed in the same direction as we undertook our journey

    I was struck sick with this love thing and she was my gentle gurney

    I never knew a love like this before and this truly concerned me

    I was like "if my heart gets broken I'm suing cupid and anger would be my attorney"

    But so far so good as love and life always prevails

    If my head's in the clouds that's because love set my heart to sail
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Man let tell you i know what u mean , this piece kinda fit me to the max !!!

    this was so on point and well felt too u hit my home base wit this one bruh !
     
  3. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was magnificent Blas...truly something special! :bowdown:

    I really got a glimpse into who you are....your words invited us to know you.



    :spinstar:Wow! Red flag Alert!!!
     
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    free2b_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I CONCUR!! SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL... ;)
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful job
    i felt every emotion in this piece
    Write on :10200:
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a rare, beautiful love ...the kind that don't come knocking everyday ...make it last ..Great piece poet!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that is the kind of love that's truly a rare jewel, and spoken from the heart. How beautiful.
     
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