Black Poetry : Love Poem #1

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love Poem #1
    MM/5/11/00 12:03:58 AM
    “Better to had loved and lost…Than not love at all.”

    Love--
    When it dissipates into stiff winds--
    Landing perfectly under somber palm trees--
    Amongst the obliging grass--

    It brings tears--
    To the strongest--
    And hurt--
    To the toughest--
    And surprise--
    To the unpredictable--

    Unable to carry the weight of problems it brings--
    Lost love lingers--
    Long and lashing--
    Similar to skinny snapping crackling--
    Whips--
    Lashing out--
    'Cuz you tired of his *****

    Yet in still feelings remain--
    With love you are tainted--
    And stained--
    Painted with pain--
    And insanely restrained
    All with the thoughts--
    You hate to contain--
    It adds stress to your brain--
    Yet you choose to refrain--
    For emotional gain--
    When emotions are strained--
    In this sorrowful game--

    Love--
    Disappearing away from you calmly--
    Cluttering your brainwaves--
    With sweet misery--
    With jazz songs and sweet kisses--
    Memories of love--
    Far gone.

    Soulfulkindakid
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this piece is simply beautiful even in its degree of melancholy. lovin' yo word play, sean...but, ofcourse, you know this already, dear friend. keep on scribin'...i'm watchin'.

    ~~mindwavesofpoeticflos~~
     
  3. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for the read LISTER

    eye got my I on you!*

    sean.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    talking about love
    eyez still on the prize
    tyte joint bruh !
     
  5. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love is a beautiful thing and you displayed this beautifly

    Lyr1c
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U did an awesome :jump: job displayin ur knowledge of love in this scribe!!! Keep it up !!! :read:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When love touches you, it leaves an impression of some sort forever. This was a touching scribe.
     
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    This is a tight piece.... The flow is like that
     
  9. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you guys for the love!!!

    Been missing...tryna further myself...but i thank you guys for reading me after sooooo long!!!! looks like i might have to start posting again.
     
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    this was tyte, somethin every1 can relate to. yes, its better to have loved n lost, then to never love at all!! 1 love
     
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