Black Poetry : Love, Picture This...

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  1. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You and I, on an island,
    With a candle light
    Dinner for two
    The night greets us
    After the sun sets in
    The north
    I feel the wind blowing
    Through my hair as I
    Watch it blowing through
    Your clothing
    I hear the wind leaving
    The sounds of earthy
    Whistles on my mind
    The sky begins to form
    Tears of tiny droplets
    Of rain as I hold you
    Close to me, and focus
    On you
    But, love, picture this...
    You and I, hand in hand,
    As we search the world
    Over for something that
    Is real and everlasting
    I believe in you, as I
    Know that you believe
    In me, too
    When I am thirsty, I look
    For you to quench my
    Thirst
    When I am hungry, I look
    For you to feed my mind
    When I am full, I look
    For you to massage my
    Temples
    When I am empty, I look
    For you to fill my heart
    With your sweet love
    My heart is overjoyed
    Love, because I have
    Fallen for someone like
    You...I thank you


    ~~~forsomeonewhomustknow~~~


    kaslis, (c)2001...all rights reserved.
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister my poetic sister!

    gurrrrrrrooole, you betta tell him!!!!!!!

    this is beauty...and beauty....and beauty again!

    thank you!

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ahhhhhh!!

    i agree so beautiful and sweet lovin
    u be a pictured perfect .......:heart: :kiss:
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oooh La La! Mami......tell that brotha what you must, and what he should know! :D

    Nice flow sistah friend!

    N2
     
  5. dnommo

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    hmmm, i'm certain it's not for me for i could never be that lucky but you always inspire me so here goes...

    you and i together
    under the pouring
    of love through
    shooting stars that
    i see when i glance into
    your eyes and smile
    at the joy of knowing
    you and i will walk
    together as i will
    embrace your with my
    strength and feed you
    with my love and carry
    you on my security that
    you and i together can
    be more than you and i apart
    shhhh, can you hear
    the beating of my heart
    completing the beating
    of yours?

    your pen speaks of mirror images as i rest in the meadow and smile to read the kindred spirit known as LISTER...

    Mad luv to ya poet...you have penned exquisitely here...
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Poetic Sister-SoulMate


    do da **** thang then!!! :lol:

    while you're thankin him... let me thank You!
    for this asSOULute-ly beautiful scribe. i'm ova
    here takin' notes!! :)

    AlwaysAlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    check out the inspiration piece, aight??
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    if i may

    you mac'd this
    listerscrib

    peace
    feeling the love
    DsS.
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *picturing this all over again*
     
  10. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister

    This is my second or third time reading this joynt and it still amazes me ma! Picture me being your fan! lol

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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