Black Poetry : love, picture this...(inspired by her, the great Listerscribin')

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love, picture this, i beseech..

    you and i on the beach
    having you within the warmth of my reach
    i beseech
    to tell you how much i love you with the stars above you
    of you my lips release praise and blessings chocolate caressings of word and phrase gentle touch and soft kisses met
    by the ocean's trinklets as the chorale of the waves harmonize with the currency of our making love..

    picture me telling you of God's entire creation you are exalted and so i write your name in the sand that even
    the strength of the tides cannot deface
    and the impetuous winds cannot erase for this is our place-
    even destiny..

    picture the universe staring at the glaring
    of my torso moreso yours
    as heaven begins to open her doors to see what love is meant to be it seems we have the key to unlock her mysteries
    as u-n- i verse
    as u-n- i verse
    so terse as the beach will forever hold this nfinite reflection of this
    sacred night this consecrated time two hearts sang one rhime
    making one perfect picture...

    thanx listerscribin'.
     
  2. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poet...poet...poet...

    you dun done it here...this is what imma talkin about...

    i thought i was the only one. man her verse will leave my pen dancing around the board for ages...what a tyte addition here...
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JP (JehiahPoetic for those who didn't know)


    see the goofy face on this smiley... :D

    dats how i beam with pride... each&every
    time i read you!! your talent is spectacular!

    (& i ain't jus sayin' that cause i'm your sister!) :lol:

    NL (NfiniteLove for those who still don't know) :)
    SunShyne~
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dnommo,

    i see you across the clear brook meditatin' in prayers ,big bro..
    you know i have to sow so that others may reap the love..
    continue to plant seeds in the garden, just as i..

    peach of poetry, GA_SunShyne,

    you're the bomb girl. see :bomb: it runs in the fam....
    i'd say we kinect on a piece...
    NL back at'cha sis....

    again,
    thanx to LISTERSCRIBIN'
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now dis be as tyght as it get

    u worked da hell out dis one i can feed off ya vibe anytyme
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dear poet...no, thank you for scribin' such beautiful love poetry. the love poetry that flowed from your pen is simply, just that...beautiful. i'm glad that my piece could be an inspiration to you. but, you are much too, kind. your work is always very enjoyable to read, trust. thank you for blessin' us all with this piece.
     
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    well inspired....

    well written.....

    well done...love is soooo good.... done well

    lovin it.... let me dip myself 7 mo into this river of sho nuff floooo, so I may be cleansed!

    thank you

    a
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just revisitin' this piece of inspiration...thank you again, dear poet.
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    thanx for da love..

    Queen A,

    the river will always be here queen...
    thanx for the love...


    LISTERSCRIBIN'
    keep inspirin' me ma i'mma have to make a cyberstatue of you
    :D
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I couldn't have done it betta! Crazy visuals!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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