Black Poetry : Love...OUCH

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  1. Agentshaft007

    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love I approach thee like a blossoming rose. I gaze at your radiance. I breath in all of the whimsical essence you have to give yet I cannot hold too tight for thy thorn can cause me pain. Love, thy pain. Love, to grasp hold of thee, there must be. . . .pain with this bliss I feel. Though I long for radiance and essence, I realize there must be pain I must endure for me to grasp thee if I am to love thee. . .L...o...v....e. . . .ouch!

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    I love this because it shows that pain is just a natural component of love........

    Peace
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  3. Agentshaft007

    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks man...I see you felt where I was on this one.

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    Love and pain....hmmm
    It baffles me how something
    that feels so wonderful can
    also feel so awful.

    Nice piece of poetry

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed well felt i see the good pain in the love that say ouch!!!!
     
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    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You ...I take a bow....
     
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