Black Poetry : love or guilt

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What would you choose: everlasting love,
    A love that is all you have, a love that
    Is the only thing that you hold dear,
    The only thing you trust, the thing that makes
    You believe, its not just any love,
    It's a love that keeps you alive, with out that
    love
    Is nothing, that no other person can
    Ever give you, that feeling of self-worth,
    A love that makes you love yourself,
    A love that makes you breathe,
    And a love that is your life, or
    Everlasting guilt,
    A guilt that will never go away,
    I always just want to tell you,
    But I can't, I can't ever tell you,
    I would rather have the love,
    But I can't stand it, I can't take it,
    It eats me alive, I want nothing
    More than to tell you, god help me,
    I want to tell you, but I don't want to loose you
     
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    I choose love,

    And you?
     
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    re: Love

    this is a excellent write.
     
  4. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u mama i choose love alwayz! :hearts2:
     
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    nothing but love i'll take and give !
    tyte drop to please the mind
     
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    If one does not say one may never know, can one possibly live with that? Liked the way you posed this piece.
     
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