Black Poetry : Love On Mind

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rashad, Jan 3, 2002.

  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking from afar
    I see my Love
    shining bright as
    the Northern star.
    Blinded at first sight
    by your radiant energy
    Your beauty captures my
    soul and makes me whole.
    My Love...
    Emotions flow freely
    from soul to mind
    as we rewind to that
    place and time
    where soul has
    no face or ryhme.
    My Love...
    Let us unite our
    souls and become
    as one you and I.
    Underneath the moonlight
    as we reminisce
    of Old love turning
    to New love and
    bitter love to sweet.
    You see in Love
    is where my soul
    wants to be.
    So that my Love
    is your love and
    your love is my love
    together we have
    OneLove.
    My Love...
    Thinking of you
    and the things
    you do to me
    for me
    through me
    Is a feeling I
    can't explain.
    Thought I'd make
    this plain, but
    somehow Love has
    my name.
    With your permission
    my Queen, I offer Love
    and
    tilt my hat on a
    bended knee to express
    my Love with
    humility genuinely.
    Hoping that you'd
    accept so that our
    souls unite eternally
    while making Love in
    pure bliss.
    Mrs.
    Love is on my mind...:heart:
     
  2. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Am So Proud Of You!

    This is absolutely beautiful. I had no idea you had this kind of talent in you. I think I'm gonna cry!
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****! ****! ****! my brother, my brother. i am with danilyn - i am about to cry!!!!???!!!! **** this was tight! so much love - so much i'm so deep into you! :toast: :love:
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks.

    Reading and listining to the souls
    placed at this site has really inspired
    me to do this.
    Thanks Kla for the support. I love what you do my brotha.
    :toast:
    Boo, this one is for you with much love.:heart:
    p.s.
    don't cry.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad,

    Using your word, TYTE!......adding mine.... Beautiful!

    Beautiful & Tyte :toast:

    My mental enjoyed the taste of this.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  6. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my goodness.....

    Brother, my brother!!! I never knew... but then I guess with the right inspiration even a blind man can become a great artist. I'm proud of you. ****... I need some tissue.
    Flow on... flow on

    ;)
     
  7. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I second...

    Danilyn...!
    thank you for sharing
    your soul with us...

    love is...~
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad.


    now! you know i love-did this!!

    love poetry is... good, but it's even
    mo' betta when a brotha is kickin'
    da flow!! :)

    thanks for sharing your soul today.

    AlwaysPeace.
    SunShyne~
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad my brutha

    This hea is a top notch love poetry! I dig the way you expressed yaself! This cant be a first scribe. I feel you on this one bruh... Keep em' coming

    Thank you for sharing
    Reas
     
  10. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "p.s.
    don't cry."


    *gasp*

    :cry:
     
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