Black Poetry : love of my past time

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  1. Flyy baby luv

    Flyy baby luv Member MEMBER

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    Feelings are blue no longer true
    the way I felt for you our love is through
    is it me
    the sun changing is coast to see new things and in turn boast
    and change like the revolving earth of sin and new needs
    which are the things you never gave me
    or is it you
    my new past time
    who made my heart commit terrible crimes
    as I sat sublime while you sought after new hearts
    and tore mine apart
    my world is turned out
    no longer
    bright and mild and tranquil as a baby girls first rest
    now it is corupt as a modern day Judah with the hurt on my chest
    see what you did to me love of my past time
    a thousand years of lime are now lost in yourgrime
    you never know what you've got till its gone
    well love of my past time so long.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said this created a motion of healing and moving forward
    love the vibe u scribe here flow on ......speaketh truth
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well you expressed yourself plain, folks don't miss their water til the well runs dry. Their loss. I hear ya, keep those flows coming.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How you speak truth..sometimes we have to just saddle up :horse: and ride out in the "sunset"
    nice piece, I like the way you laided this out ...thanks
     
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