Black Poetry : love of my Dreams

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  1. Godfather

    Godfather Active Member MEMBER

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    This is quite old, but has a special place in my heart. Put it together on one of those days.
    Hope that you feel it. Peace Godfather.
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    ................love of my dreams..................



    You are the reason for my every action and every abnormal action makes sense because of you
    You are the tempo to my heartbeat, the swing in my step, the rhythm to my life, the country of my love, the soul of my spirit
    You are the sun in my day, the moon in my night, the star of my midnight, my rainbow, my promise and I love you.


    Your eyes are the windows to my paradise,
    Your sweet touch is like the feel of silk sown by love itself
    Your voice, your whisper, your language, your dialect is as sweet as watching the sun flirt with the single cloud on the horizon
    Your curves seem to have been carved by an angle and your scar engraved by the creator of love
    Your very kiss is a breath of oxygen to my soul that rejuvenates it but at the same time addicts it and now I can’t do other than love you.


    I want to be able to guide you to the land of my fantasies, to take you on a tour of its lakes, mountains, caves, fields …and to enthrone you as its queen – and to love you
    I want to travel to see every culture, to the thirteen corners of the earth, to the cliff of the galaxy, the lost places of the universe, to learn more than 894 ways to love so that I can love you
    I want to travel back into time, back to the years before last to stop all the times that I ever loved, and my heart would have felt nothing, hoped nothing, dreamt of nothing, skipped a beat for nothing...........have done nothing else but love you


    When I woke up this morning from my dream
    My heart had spun upon itself seventy and seven times, stopping just opposite itself but staring at love and asking it how
    How can it be the antidote yet the disease?
    How can it be the pain yet the pleasure?
    How can it be the sweet yet the bitter with an extra hint of sour?
    How can it feel this way yet I’ve never smelt your perfume, felt your warmth, heard your laugh, seen your smile
    How can it feel this way yet I’ve never seen you, recognised you, met you........
    But every night in my dreams it is you.
     
  2. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is a beautiful thing
    flow on
     
  3. elayne.

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    godfather.


    have i read this one before? if i did... i'm mad as
    hell that i don't remember. :) anyway... i love it.
    ...your words always read like a beautiful love
    letter. *sighin*... thank you fro sharing.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  4. Ladysoul

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    This is beautiful. It gave me chills. Keep up the good work!
     
  5. Godfather

    Godfather Active Member MEMBER

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    Thunder and Ladysoul, want you to know that your comments are very appreciated. Thanx for reading a droping a line.

    Elayne....well my dear, yes you have read this one before but you are forgiving. Thanx for your words, u know what they do to me.

    Godfather
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Godfather,
    I think I have just falling in love :kiss:
    So very smooth, romantic and lovely Thank you for giving a glimpse of hope of what a wonderful feeling love could be.

    Be blessed and keep flowing

    :flirt:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love is grand a thing we all need
     
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    WHOA!!! Mesmerizing flow.... I am swept away by your words. You were defintely inspired by the love in your heart to write this... FLOW ON!!!
    Now that's FLOETRY at it's best!!
    1 Love
     
  9. Godfather

    Godfather Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, thank you, thank you. Your words flatter me so much. Thanx each and everyone of you for showing so much love.

    Thanx
    Godfather
     
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    very nice.....looking forward to reading more of your work
     
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