Black Poetry : Love Notes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SistaMoon, Aug 31, 2002.

  1. SistaMoon

    SistaMoon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is it an absurd thought of you lovin me for me?
    And not for just my body
    my curves my *** my thighs and hips that desire the fire of pure ecstasy
    could u fall in love with the depths that lies beneath my soul?
    Could u fall in love with these eyes that can gaze so deep into yours
    would it be ok with me being able to see thru the windows of your soul, behold your past and feel your pain with just a glance
    Do you see anything wrong wit me wanting to touch you? Hold you and you holdin me
    And how about me leavin you sentimental notes and poetry and how about you doin the same for me? Is that being absurd?
    Am I wrong for wanting you this immensely?
    Is it wrong for me to want you without absolutely no nonsense attached?
    Loving me and me only
    What’s wrong wit me having your back and you knowin you got mine?
    Hey seriously, do you see anything wrong with that?

    Love Notes
     
  2. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sistamoon.


    personal-ly... i'ont see a **** thang wrong
    wit it!! :D but since you ain't talkin to me...
    just give him some time... i'm sho he'll come
    'round! :) i enjoyed the read!! thank you
    for sharing.

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
  3. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've read this twice now, so I decided to post...i enjoyed the read and the images that it brings forth...
     
  4. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So well said SistaMoon. I don't see anything wrong either with a womans true honest emotions and desires. Thank you for sharing this, hoping you get the answer you are seeking.
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ain't nothing wrong with that.
    In fact... it sounds like a great start
    to a meaningful relationship.
    Nice scribe. :)

    Coco :heart:
     
  6. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looka Hea Slim...

    At my second chance of veiwing your art I can see now that i'll be continually checkin fa more! Love what you've done hea and there's nothin wrong wit gettin right to the point...lol Im liking your style.

    Do yo thang

    Reas
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nuttin at all

    nice flo--ain't nuttin wrong wid it at all--Amun-Ra :cool:
     
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