Black Poetry : Love Notes

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  1. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he read me like sheet music
    my shallow breathing was
    the sixteenth rest
    betwixt fermata'd half note gazes
    and i blushed under his practiced eyes

    he strummed my heartstrings
    with his right hand
    fingered my soul with the left
    and i prayed that coda would never come...
    that the last notes would be followed
    by endless repeats

    but crescendo became diminuendo
    what was forte
    is now pianissimo
    and the aria that was belted out
    in wild abandon
    is now sweetly crooned in my ear...

    love notes always sound better that way


    c. 2003 Brandi N. Rainey
    All rights reserved
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wery clever, She! Very poetic!
    enjoyed this flow!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smooth vibe u posed it in fashion
    keep scribing poet!
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin your original style.
    clever piece.

    Keep scribin poet.
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh
    My
    :D I'm gonna have to revist this one once mo
    Natasha
     
  6. Applejacque

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    I think I read this before

    ,...when you maybe might have posted this on DPJ a while back, right? Let me know if I'm mistaken. I liked it then, and I like it now,.....
     
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    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LOVED THIS
     
  8. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "he strummed my heartstrings
    with his right hand
    fingered my soul with his left"

    these words radiate the beauty of the music between two people..

    K
     
  9. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    skrybe7...

    Thanks for the read here. Glad you enjoyed.

    Serenity...
    She
     
  10. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll do my best to keep it comin'. Thanks for your words.

    Serenity...
    She
     
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