Black Poetry : Love never lived HERE

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  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If a man closes his fist
    Fashions himself a weapon
    Of himself
    points his rage
    And pulls the trigger of his furry
    Unleashing the violence of his
    “love”
    on the one he
    “loves”
    than he himself is his only
    true love

    and when he wakes from
    his stupor
    and sees the damage of his
    “LOVE”
    if he really loved the one
    he loves
    his love
    for his
    loved one
    would force him to
    destroy this
    weapon of destruction
    before it could ever be used again
    against the one
    "he loves"
    and
    anything less
    is not self less
    but selfish
    and
    love don’t live
    there
    ever
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed one whom strike wit blow showing rage
    from his love unto his lover is a rude awakening
    and love just don't live their at all .....future not so bright
    no change one will fall off da face of earth
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A very poignant piece!

    HE THAT KNOWETH , FLOWETH ...FLOW WITH
    IT!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaz,
    This is an incredible piece
    spit'n crystal clear truth.
    You broke it down to whats real.
    I wholeheartedly agree.


    Scribeaboutit! It helps
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$Rich$$
    thank you poet

    ms
    thank you

    coco
    thank you and glad you agree
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

    one of the all time top 10 pieces of work poet

    i love the message here
    something to think about

    this piece poet, i can't tell you enough how great it is


    DSS
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shazzy.


    g'on & preach on it poet!! :)

    i enjoyed the read... thorough-ly.
    thank you for sharing. :)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  8. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja
    It is always a pleasure man / just another battlefront!
    feel me

    GA
    very good to here from you
    glad you liked
     
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