Black Poetry : Love N Truth...Truth N Love

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  1. LovNThySoul

    LovNThySoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love was out and about that day
    As free as the wind, carefree...out to play

    Love found itself close with many, sometimes understood
    Some know love with situations strange,...uncanny and don't care as the should

    Some know love with truth and others say they know love but are truthless
    Some say the know love with truth, but then why are they so ruthless

    How can you say you know love, when you never knew love from the start
    How can there be any truth with your love, when you don't even love from the heart

    There's more to love then just the words, there is a truth that lies within
    But if you say you love with no truth of that love, all you do is sin

    See i know love within, because it lies deep within my soul
    I am truthful with myself unlike some women and men, nah....i don't play any roles

    So how do you love...is it real? Is it with truth or with conditions
    Don't you know that if love and truth are together and you honor that....you will be the rich ones

    Just something to swirl in the brain, to help that loving soul to grow
    Hopefully you'll learn this without pain, and you find more love than you could ever know
     
  2. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Truth is Love
    Love is desire
    The feeling you give
    Delights my fire
    Is love the beauty that I see
    Is it the situation that my heart brings
    Is it too early to feel like this
    My first poem made me feel like this
    I guess its just me
    Trying to show you more than words
    With clever ryhmes and potent slures
    Ya Heard
    My mind gives me the strength
    The want and the strength to live
    No conditions it is what it is
    No games to play-Thats for the kids
    We gone make a way-This is the real
    Now that there is no pain
    I have more love than I could ever know
    Now I hope to find a Queen

    Nice Piece
    Much Love Poet
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No room for games in truth or in love, this was right on target poet.
     
  4. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a beautifull poem.....





    that is all i can say.....




    beautifull poet...

    keep writing and walking in truth...








    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte smooth drop right here wow!
     
  6. LovNThySoul

    LovNThySoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tantrum...

    Thanks bruh. Appreciate your input as always


    Watzinaname...

    Thank you too. I try to keep it from the heart and soul. Only way to be.


    Auroraflower .....

    Thank you for seeing a brotha as beautiful with only the words seen from my mind, heart and soul. Bloom into something beautiful...more than you already are.



    $$Rich$$

    Thanks man.Appreciate the love.

    Peace all.
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HI LovNThySoul
    Very deep drop
    and a poet inspiration
    to feel beyond the words
    Yeah...Nice write :)

    Peace Unto You
     
  8. LovNThySoul

    LovNThySoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Blue. Much appreciated. :)
     
  9. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm diggin ya piece/peace...Nuffin realer than TRUTH-n-LOVE...peace Poet

    Peace!
    Drizz
     
  10. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful poem,
    i kno im new to the board but im feelin it,
    So holla back at the kid one
     
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