Quiet Poetry Lounge : love my woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Aug 6, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love my woman
    she can tease
    she can please
    carry the weight of my world
    while on her knees
    i love her heart
    i love her mind
    a woman like her
    so hard to find
    caring and generous
    respectful and kind
    hearing her voice
    a whirlwind of sound
    spinning me around
    around and around
    i love my woman
    love the joy i've found

    be
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Master Poet

    You blend the tenderness of a sweet love, with the strength that joy can bring, in this beautiful beautiful flow.

    And you is a versatile Poet on top a alladat! I love it when you come sexy... too. So many sides and levels of you.

    I recognize and appreciate your artistry, with all respect due.

    :heart:

    alyce
     
  3. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Ms A. Coming from you, the bestest Poet, that is high praise. I'm humbled and inspired to keep writing, keep trying to make it easy by writing about different things.

    be
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well all I can say, is VERY BEAUTIFUL indeed. Heartfelt and well deserved I am sure!
     
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    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...uh uh uh... weeelllllll now

    Saleem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    with no doubt
    ya love is felt here
    and she knows it too...BE ya on fire bru..
     
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