Black Poetry : Love Memorized

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  1. nadea

    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    You loved me
    Like no other love I'd felt before.
    But it wasn't real
    You'd went back into time
    and replayed your visions of love
    You played them over and over again
    until you had love memorized.
    And then you repeated them to me.
    You repeated your visions of love to me.
    Except they weren't meant for me.
    They were meant for your past love.
    The love that treated you like crap love.
    The love you still want to be your now love.
    The love that has always been your only love.
    I don't hate you.
    Truth be told, you did love me.
    The best you knew how, considering.
    Considering that you tried to detatch
    the faces engraved in your visions of love.
    One in particular, you tried to replace with mine.
    I don't hate you.
    Truth be told, you tried to love me.
    The best you knew how considering.
    Considering your very own idea of love.
    The idea of love that you had
    Memorized.
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah

    I've been there...you describe it well...

    1luv
    2fish
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feel ya on dis kinda love of one's mental
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...
    i been there and felt all of dis...
    they love in their own way
    so it dont mean they didnt
    just their way...peace :angel1:
     
  5. nadea

    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, :(

    ...In their own way.

    Thank you guys for the replys.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've been here, yo, and it's painful. Lovin this flow.
     
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    whoa....profound concept!

    Love memorized...so eloquently scribed...

    Great piece!
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte scribe, i feel u. keep ur head up. much love.... :)
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are deep
    my sister
    nice flow
    very nice
    Peace
     
  10. channie

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    i loved that!!!!!!1
     
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