Black Poetry : Love Memoirs pt. 2

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soblessed, Jan 22, 2006.

  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awakening
    IfuCome and soblessed collab

    My steps faltered my breath slowed My heart ached
    And just as I wanted the earth to open up and swallow me whole
    Just as I did not think I had the strength to go on
    Just when I couldn't look forward anymore
    I glanced up and there u where
    Awakening a yearning deep within me
    Causing me to be alive again
    Feeling things that I had forgotten
    I miss being in love
    Then again came the voice from north
    You didn't see me but I saw u
    you didn't see me watching you.. feeling you...
    But I knew than you were different
    I knew I had to get to know you
    You smiled
    Looked my way and my prowess is renewed

    My pulse quickened
    Now peace will never be still with my heart..
    now my being is a flutter of love and the things lovers do
    I whisper to you out of the blue
    Do you know love is a verb
    I immediately sense the awkwardness
    I touch your forearm
    And with my eyes I say relax
    And once you're calm
    I say again
    Love is verb
    It requires action
    Let's actively engage in what lovers do
    It's more then sexual
    It's intimacy in it's purest form
    It's full of zeal may sound blasphemies
    But it's unadulterated and genuine
    Your interest is piqued ...

    To be continued.....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhh y'all doing it too sweet love how this flowed
    tyte collabo
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was wonderful, love reawakened. Love is a verb, yes, act upon it...waiting for more...
     
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    this was beautiful you two keep doing what cha do. flow on my beautiful sistas!!!!!!!!!!!! :kiss1:
     
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    Quote: "Now peace will never be still with my heart.."


    This line right here is so powerful and true...To me, it says once you experience that thing called "love", whether its goes good or bad, your heart will be affected accordingly...Another great collabo, Sistahs...Keep doin yawl thang...Peace..




    Drizz
     
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    This colab is smoking
    Love is a verb
    That was silky smooth
    Loving your flow sisters
    Soblessed & Ifucomesoflty
     
  7. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ((((((((((Thank You Sooo Much Rich, Watz, Drizz, Nevar & Tan... ))))))))
    Sister Soblessed is a Slave Driver. LOL. We appreciate the love poets...

    Softly
     
  8. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister Ifucome why you put me on front street like that... LOL.....Ty you all for love we got more chapters so keep a look out...
    We just getting started....
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful, just wonderful poet:kiss1: :kiss1:
     
  10. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TY cursed heart.....
     
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