Black Poetry : Love Memoirs Part 1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soblessed, Jan 12, 2006.

  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IfUComeSoftly and Soblessed Collab

    The Beginning

    Going through life
    With someone but alone
    Forgetting the touch of a man
    Longing to feel loved
    Yearning to feel important

    Becoming invisible
    Wanting a lover
    Not appreciated
    Being taken for granted
    A woman

    Trying to please her mate
    To be a good woman
    Still neglated
    Do the things to please him
    Attempting to make him happy

    Each day they drift apart
    Hardly speaking to one another
    Love becoming selfish
    More war than love
    I'm here but I'm not

    Just fading away
    The silence is deadly
    The void like an abyss
    Inside she cries
    She is lonely

    Right at her weakest moment
    Something happens
    From the North came a voice
    As peaceful as summer rain
    Decandant as pure chocolate
    Resounding bright and alluring


    To be continued
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    where one forget and don't love
    another will treasure and cherish
    this was well felt and nice collabo.
     
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    Sister Soblessed
    Two thums up sweety
    Love your flow on this
    Cant wait to read the rest
    To Be Continued
    Much Love Sister Poet
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Me signing this thread means, I've walked a mile in your shoes ...and further, I can relate to that...what I couldn't do...was stay there and swollow.
    I dig the collab...tight piece poets
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've certainly been there, right next to someone, and still, oh so lonely. The two of you expressed this feeling quite well. Can't wait to read more.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Longing to feel loved
    Yearning to feel important"

    I'm relating to these lines right herre....Nice collabo, Soblessed & IfUComeSoftly...Cant wait for the next chapter...




    Drizz
     
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    Where is Part Two?
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is some collaboration you go my sistah!!!!!!!!!!1:kiss1:
     
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    awaiting pt 2 of y'all
    i like dis here sista queenz ...
     
  10. Tya

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    Nice. Real nice as Bernie mack would say
     
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