Black Poetry : Love me.......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Feb 13, 2007.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love me​
    unconditonally
    Love me​
    faithfully
    Love me​
    tenderly

    Love is a beautiful emotion ​
    Love can't be bought in a form of a magic potion
    Love can you for a second can you say your heart is true​
    I have had many mens to make this southern girl heart turn blue​
    and
    cold​
    I like to know what real love is before I turn old

    My brother I have made plenty of mistakes
    But now I must ask that you wait
    and
    be patient
    So many hardships I have been facing

    That I sometimes turn to see noone is there
    If you look deep into my eyes you will see a lonely girl who's scared
    to
    Love again
    I need a friend

    More than a lover
    All want to discover

    Where my heart beats
    My feets

    Are tired from brother's coming and going
    After a few months they go to showing

    Their true color
    Have me trapped to not knowing no other
    I cant go no further

    Then the front door and out the back
    I say ease up my brother give me some slack

    I was a slave to his abuse
    And I refuse

    To lie where sleeping dogs lie
    I dont want to cry

    No more
    Be angry
    no more
    Be fustrating
    no more

    I want to explore the meaning of a real relationship
    Dont tell me I have pretty eyes or juicy lips
    How you could take me on a expensive trips

    Because I'm not a golddigger
    I don't claim to be a sista of many figures
    I figure

    You want a woman who can treat you like a King
    And I wouldn't mind if my brother would be proud to have his Queen

    Upon his arms
    No storm

    Could ever break the bond we share
    I do care

    About you
    But the only thing I want you to do is

    Love me...........


    Copyright 2007
    Nevar
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey nevar,
    In my Opinion, the way to tell if a man can/will truly give you love, is to study how he treats himself! ..for he/she/we can never give another what we don't give ourselfs. That's a natural fact.
    Your love will come soon.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Disappointing when love seems so promising, only to fail. I believe we all have more than one complementary mate, they're just not always in clear view. Feeling your flow poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love can drive broken promises to a disappointing feeling one way to
    asure is be sure and let it flow .......U will know
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to all who have showed me love on this sensitive piece!
     
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    most welcome surely ya heart was felt through every beat
     
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    I've been trapped in the mystery of love.. So Im def feelign this drop..
     
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