Quiet Poetry Lounge : LOVE ME

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 4EVERLUV, Jun 6, 2006.

  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A heart so big a passion so strong,
    Just longing for someone to hold on,
    Feelings that consume me, needing to be released,
    Indirectly searching for that emotional peace,
    Wishing for a savior, hoping to see the light,
    That shines when happiness feels so right,
    Yearning for the touch, the sweet gentle kiss,
    All these things are what I truly miss,
    Needing to be needed wanting to be loved,
    Tired of the loneliness that I have become so a custum of.
    I struggle with my thoughts I wonder why me.
    I am worthy of happiness, love, trust, and honesty.
    The days are long but the years pass fast.
    When I look back I cannot help but ask myself
    Why did I waste my time on that.
    But I guess it has all been a lesson for me
    Because now I see the bull**** before the bull**** sees me.
    I know this life has something in store for me.
    Because the man above won’t let something so great go to waste.
    And I am going to chill and not be in a haste.
    I’m cruzing at a slow steady pace.
    Seeing it for what it is and not for what I want it to be.
    Because no one can love me more than I can love me.
     
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    Hi 4EVERLUV
    Being true to You, loving You, captavaitng You...is all the medicine you need ...to get what you want.
    Nice piece poet..your drops are wonderful...^5
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much, Queen.

    Something I learned the long hard way. Your kindness is most appreciated.
    Much Luv
     
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    There's no better love and warmth then within
    being u is the greatest treasure in the world

    holding on to that something deep inside
    love from the heart where love reside
    beauty of warmth is truely da worth
    to inner peace that allows to be released

    tyte poetic drop
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad you like

    Thank you 4 the Luv.
     
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    Most welcome my sweet from up above .....watching u !
     
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    You posed so well what many have had to learn the hard way, that although we all want to be loved, it is important that we have a love of self. Expressed on point.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Watz,

    We must luv oneself before we can give luv to anyone else. Thanks again for your words of kindness.
    Much Luv
     
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    i think we all have been down that road before are you sure you dont stay next door to me. just kidding well done write sis flo on.:rolling:
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No Nevar, we are not neighbors, but I feel where your coming from.:) Thank you for the read.
     
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