Black Poetry : Love Me Thoroughly

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lord,
    Now that you've shown me a true man of God I...can't focus on anything else.
    Yes, I know that in order to love someone else you must first have a love of "self" and
    Forgive "self" for mistakes of the past. Just as you have done for me...
    So now I'm...

    Makin' moves towards a
    swifter groove
    Love of YOU FIRST I...
    don't want to lose

    but Lord, I'm tired and lonely

    dealin' w/this
    dealin' w/that...can't
    find a man to...
    love me thoroughly?
    This is wack!!

    Soon be knockin' on
    30's door...
    eyes bloodshot from
    cryin' in fetal
    ALONE on the floor

    Lord, Please help me. I'm...
    tired and lonely

    Crying to you for inner strength
    and patience...hoping you hear my cry I...
    sometimes feel like...I want to die!! waitin'
    for this man who...IS... so fly!

    WHY? WHy? why?
    is my patience wearin' thin
    as I wait...anticipate the arrival
    of the man who'll, sing me a...
    Sweet love song and
    NOT EXPECT me to...SHIMMY...IN
    heels and a thong?

    Is it a fallacy that
    a man can...
    Love me thoroughly?

    Kiss it/lick it/hit it...he's out
    this Aint what bein' a man is...
    all about
    Lord you know the desires of
    my heart
    Knew I'd desire him
    from the start

    Sexy/intelligent w/spirit and class
    Wondering if God sent him as
    MY BOAZ...

    Lord Jesus...I'm tired and desperately lonely

    Preparing to meet my Knight...
    My...
    Knight in Shining Armor who WILL...

    "Love Me Thoroughly"

    ©2000 EssenceofAminata
     
  2. nubianlover

    nubianlover Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TRUELY

    YO time has come
    forth the love of he
    whom be in the name of
    the father
    yo cries r heard within
    the whisper of silent prayer
    now i stand before u and wink!
    i watch from across the land of nubia
    i see ya in motion
    looking yearning like a burning bush
    so here i offer u this .
    my heart in whole
    my love in respect
    my soul in one
    to caress and comfort u to smiles
    ----------------------------------------------------------
    Very nice piece......my Queen
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umm Hmm...

    I feel ya Afri...nice flow. He will indeed be there when ya least expect him ta be!!! :)

    L&R
    GQ
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister, hey nice to see ya or should I say nice to read ya here in this new house. As usual your scribe is magnificent! Do yo' thang sis..."...cryin' in fetal alone on the floor" Wow!

    your bro, blak
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    afridancr:

    stay patient as the sea, awaiting the rivers
    as the sun when it is down, knowing that it's dawn is yet to set...
    however, continue to "delight yourself in God, and He will give you the desires of your heart" as it's written..
    time and order belongs to God..
    just know that everything is in His hands, but seek his face rather...
    the time is surely coming

    j'hiah
    praying
    in his serene garden...

    bow with me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AFRI

    YA LOVE IS TOUCHED
    U R HEARD
    AND ALONE NOT FORTH HE BE
    WATCHING OVER THEE
    SOFT PRAYERS LINE THE FACE
    OF TRUTH HE'S COMING!
    FROM FLIGHT I KNOW I SEE AND I TELL
     
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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    Afridancr this is a most beautiful prayer
    knowing God feels and hears this
    cause I do

    Beauitful Sis

    *feeling this*
    please bless us with more

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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