Black Poetry : Love me from the inside

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by naujae, Nov 8, 2004.

  1. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't love me from the outside because onre day you may not like what you see just love me from the inside that's also a part of me

    love me for my heart and my mind don't love for my body that is fine or my eyes which are pretty

    a man needs a strong woman in order for her to be strong you have to love her from the inside get to know her heart as well as her mind the heart is going to tell you thing that are true and how it is feeling the mind sort thing out and tell you only what is willing so to keep me happy just love me from the inside.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    within is found beauty alot miss because they only read the cover
    like how you did this enjoyed it

    peace
    Angel
     
  3. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you to all that response to my poet that lets me know what people like so there for it inspired me to write more
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said one so loveth for deep within will hold da beauty of outside
    as well i hear ya speaking ..............flow on !
     
  5. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    NICE WORK :thinking: HOOKUP
     
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    This was brief...and "power packed" even a blind man should be able to respect this. thanks for sharing this piece of wisdom.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something that we often forget, thank you for the poetic reminder, I hear ya poet.
     
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    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gotta admitt these verse of love and passion from u has made me an admirer. mad luv to u and ur pen
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thats the real thing...to "love the inside"...love me fromthe inside"
    keep spreading the real...keep flowing...
     
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