Black Poetry : Love Me Because ...

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Love me not , forth comely grace
    not even my pleasing gentle face
    not unto da eyes of my outter coat
    nor outward parts , but my inner heart
    for my caressing & caring to bond
    love me coz i'm a son
    of the father above
    whom bless me to come in love

    Love me wit compassion
    love me to an affection
    allow me to capture da rapture
    of ya soul , in my mental
    forever i hold

    so love me because
    who i am
    not what i am
    where i be
    not where u wish me to be
    love me from ya deep
    center of heart
    dis how my loving start
    let the vibe still in ya mind
    coz i'm loyal sweet & kind

    so love me from da core
    and feel da depth
    of what's instore

    but love me just because ..:heart: :love: :heart:
     
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    Rich, I must confess...when I read the title I was so anxious to read this because I just knew this was going to be Beautiful! And yes I'm loving the gift inside of you that has so beautifully enabled you to paint the words you've graced us with. Wonderful piece!
     
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    Yes this was wonderfull you graced me sertanly with this poem
    yes "love me from tha center of youre heart..thats how love starts"
    that where real love always starts....
    in tha heart....
    only in the heart..:heart:
    i enjoined reading this
    much love liberty
     
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    Nice flow RICH...feelin it.

    I love the man in you
    i love the man you are
    i love your gentle kindness
    so rare like a shooting star

    you touch the center of my heart
    your blood race through my soul
    The only place I want you love
    is here inside from the cold.

    The love i have for you
    it cannot be measure
    it will last until the end of time
    and that is what really matters.
    Peace
     
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    Awesome flow Rich
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    angelic................because i care dis i bare
    from above is my love & devotion so love me for me
    not whom i be nor what i am Thankz

    liberity..........from da heart is love inside love is a heart
    it all start their and that heart is me deep within
    thankz sis..

    bluewater ....my love is the comfort blanket
    and da emotions is the soft pillow so i grace
    u ever so close ya in my lovin heart more and more
    theirs no measure how i feel now my love rest
    within from the cold to warmth of ya touch
    thank u much sweetie.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    skrybe....thankz just pushing a piece of my heart around
    wordz.........of love is touched by da hand da pen in a
    strolling motion as it scribe .................
     
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    this is soooooooooo beautiful...i've wanted to speak these words for a LONG time...but i never wrote them down...absolutely beautiful
     
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    thank u just hold them in ya mental thoughts
    coz in time u will speak them so much clear...
     
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    Hi Rich,

    This is a wonderfully and beautifully written piece!!

    I am so glad you shared it with us.

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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