Quiet Poetry Lounge : love me again

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sahara heart, Sep 14, 2004.

  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everyday I see you,
    Everyday I long for your touch...
    I run through the memories of us
    as we were before
    When we went swimming and you held me playfully
    The endless times you scribbled sweet words on my back
    The look in your eyes when you told me
    that one day you would marry me.

    The flowers you bought me
    still seem like a fresh bunch
    i received but an hour ago.
    The endless talks and kisses
    we shared just never
    seemed long enough.

    And now, since we've been apart,
    one little voice resounds in my heart
    as it proclaims its love for you.

    Each day, I painfully bear your presence
    because it pains me so much
    to love you and you haven't the faintest clue.

    Everyday
    I see you,
    I want you to love me
    the way you once did.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could feel the ache in this. Such a bittersweet scribe.
     
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    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That is both beautiful and heartfelt!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this reminds me of a love i thought i knew to love again once more is
    a great beauty i feel all ya emotions flowing here
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ah, yes... bittersweet memories. Pretty words, yet sad eomtions behind it. Deep.
     
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    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks 4 the love brothers and sisters. Blessings to you all!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise unto u many blessing thankz for sharing
     
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