Black Poetry : Love Mathematics

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1+1 used to equal 2, but lately I’ve been coming to see,
    that with me and you, it equals, 3, 4, 5, or more…
    like your mother, always putting her 75 cents in,
    debating with me, attempting to rule your life,
    baby, no wonder it’s stressing me…
    the trigonometry of our love is being disrupted,
    rudely interrupted,
    it should be adjacent (that’s just you and me),
    meshing over our hypotenuse
    (the strength of our bond….our unbreakable line)
    but instead outside opinions keep butting in
    turning our cosine into sine
    it’s ruining my concentration,
    as my attraction for you has begun to be divided,
    I’m to busy subtracting the nay sayers from our happy addition,
    to give you your deserved attention,
    maybe we should differentiate our relationship
    from all these other so called “loves”
    and integrate all our various pleasures
    into a tight knit circle that holds,
    I want to multiply our days of happiness,
    and eradicate all the negative vibes,
    elevating our love quadratic to the third level
    where you + me = us
    no substitutions or inverse operations,
    just us….just us, in our regular notation
    summing up our love
    to even more accurate approximations,
    because that’s the way love should be
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you've got it down to the science of numbers...
    very strong peace.
    LOVE THIS! -7:spinstar:
     
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    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast: That was tite as an ACUTE ANGLE. I wish you could hear me clap. Fantastic flow.
     
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    I like the way you talk mathematics...you explain it all in a way that makes perfect sense...

    K
     
  5. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the read and responses....much love for all your appreciation.

    keep scribin'

    MJ
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoyed the way you put that togetha poet.....



    One
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was da math class of da day very well done poet !
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo!

    This was hella creative!!! I thought about dropping somethin like this when I took algebra last semester but it wouldn't have been this good!!! lol

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  9. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks again everyone for the responses....I feel mad love up in here....and Reason....I know you can flow, you know you can flow, so I figure, whatever you would have come up with would have been impressive.

    keep scribin' and much love

    MJ
     
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