Quiet Poetry Lounge : Love Making Love Making Love....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Mar 27, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    conscious mind reached out
    transcended space
    folded time
    caused a cataclysmic encounter
    of the poetic kind

    heartbeats, reminiscent of
    ancient drums... relayed an
    urgency...obeying
    our common destiny

    joined at the spirit
    in the purity of a still black night
    connected by the bond of faith
    bringing forth inner vision,
    restoring sight

    keeper of my heart
    essence of my dreams
    mirror of my soul
    the echo of my screams


    sealed by life's nectar
    protected by Jah love
    speaking in sacred tongues
    exploring the 'unheard of'


    teaching, we be taught
    seeking, we both found
    love wuz not for naught
    standing on solid ground

    conscious mind touched
    conscious mind
    melded complete thoughts
    into one life time

    ...defying the gravity of language
    lofty, void of mundane view
    mind, spirit and body blending
    when I make love to you

    Alyce, 2000

    From "B-52"
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Write it down Poet!!! This is yet another example of your awesome talent and poetic excellence.

    BE
     
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    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *nodding in agreement with BE*...and just another sample of your rich experiences in this thing called love.... we all should be so blessed to touch this way...

    s
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurl...git outta heah! :jumping:
    This is so deep, I almost drowned myself.

    keeper of my heart
    essence of my dreams
    mirror of my soul
    the echo of my screams


    sealed by life's nectar
    protected by Jah love
    speaking in sacred tongues (have you been in my bedroom?)
    exploring the 'unheard of'
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all so much! :) .... and uh ruh, Sista Joyce, you know I find that when it's perfect like dat.... those sounds just start ta flowin... it's much like that song that even the angels cannot sing...feel me now :wink:

    :D

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I second that motion Alyce ya skillz be A-1
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We were made to love and it pleases me to always hear of pure unconditonal ... not infatuation, but totally beautiful words... the truth....so satisfying... keep doing it girl!!!!!... 1Love
     
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    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is a depth

    about you that pierces through cyberspace, captivating and obliterating everyone who reads you. Is there anyone who has actually survived the true touch of you, ms. alyce?

    amazing woman, you.

    brb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love of love
     
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    ...TIGHT....your words came to life....is your voice as sweet as the one I heard in my head while I was reading...???....;)
     
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