Black Poetry : Love Makin

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss2: Bodies entangled, lips pressed against each other, sweat glisened off your face, eyes focused on mine, your touch so soothing, my heart pounds, I feel you caress my neck w/ your soft lips, your fingers run down my chest, my nails on your back, I feel your heart pounding next to mine, I want you, I want all of you, your breath hits my cheek, my lips on your chest, you wave your hand through my hair, I touch your lips w/ my finger, I lead them back to mine, I feel that you want me, you want to be inside of me, I kiss you to let you know it's OK, you enter me, I feel my body relax, you grind into my body slowly, I nibble on your ear, I let out a moan, you tremble as my breath tickles your ear, your warm mouth on my collar bone, your tongue wetting my chest, my nails scratch at your shoulder, you pound deeper and deeper, an explosion in my body, I scream, you kiss me hard on the mouth, I press my lips to yours, your tongue massages mine, you begin to groan, you grind faster, another explosion, but not of mine, your body slows, my finger tips run over the sweat on your face, I pull you close, pressing my lips to yours, I feel your breathing slow down, you play w/ my hair, I begin to drift into sleep just as you whisper, "I love you."
     
  2. Poetrymama

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    re: Love

    Hot! :bomb:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    romanticly juicy
    love the dip of this script !
     
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    This just a moment caught in time
    Very nice piece.
    Thanx for sharing.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spicy interlude you've penned here poet. Enjoyed the flow.
     
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    freak! i see it runs in the family lol. and you talk about me.
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dddddddddddoinggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!


    i aint got nuthin else to say!!
     
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    Don't mind me
    I'm just caught up in the
    love maikn'
    I like this
     
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    wel aight than...


















    in there can be LOTS of viriaty in love making..

    Some call if ruff ..i call it Thunder passion...
    some call it a fast quicky...i call it road runner lol


    as long as this 2 people love eachother ....
    than there is nothing wrong with it...








    nice piece Poet



    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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