Black Poetry : love love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybe7, May 28, 2003.

  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    at first glance or superficial
    or circumstantial evidence
    from the initial
    observations prevelant
    examples pervasive
    words are words
    still deeds be more persuasive
    so many beautiful faces
    oh but what a waste if
    love ain't at the basis
    of the being
    I mean I mean
    some of the things I'm seein'
    bes' believe I'm droppin' love
    and it ain't no thing
    what I bring
    from the top of the dome
    this is what I'm knowin'
    my peoples be like on
    when they off in the zone
    peace to the Richness
    forever spreadin' the love
    always be consistant
    no vibes rise above
    my peoples drops it wit' a thickness
    haters can't resist
    so complex it's simplistic
    automatic love
    send it wit' a quickness
    effective reflexive
    blink and you missed it
    peace to my people's Ashanta
    epidomy
    of beautiful black minds
    stayin' conscious
    she's sim-pah-ly
    oh so amazin'
    food for thought
    for many minds who be grazin'
    blazin'
    both hands in the
    fires of wisdom
    mind's alight game tyte
    and on a mission
    Peace to my peoples the Poet
    artist's artist wit' heart to get this flow
    ain't nuttin' to my people's
    bettah aak like you know
    Peace to my peoples Money
    Herlove, and blak, the Luscious, and lovely
    bes' believe when it's love
    yo I'm givin' plenty
    especially to Destee
    Cindy, Serenti
    Pantha, Bishop,
    Legacy, Poetically
    Aaliyah, Sherykah
    I know that's right
    T, Red, She, Delight
    and all my peoples
    who be gracin' the site
    keep on keepin' on baby
    we gon' get it right
    remember love
    heads up
    and keep ya game tyte

    (c)05/03/Michael
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH MY GOD I'M GONE FAINT!! :):):) this is sooooooooooo beautiful skyrbe I think I'm in luv with you. ;) thanks for all the luv you give I want you to kno you get it right back :kiss: nice flow as always you most def deserve poet of the week more like month :) until next time peace unto you keep flowin for me :kiss: :) :kiss: :)
     
  3. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol Thanx Serenti! At least someone liked the poem.
    too much love? not enough or what?
    Peace to ya, Sweetness!
    :wink: back atcha:)
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice

    Wonderful display of love and warm dedication to the other poets and love.....

    Blessings
    Queen
     
  5. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Queen! I sho' thought that's
    what I was doin'...
    btw I checked out your web site very nice!!!!
    Peace and love!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed my brutha of flow
    love is all to know
    scribing in motion from above
    it's all about love
    give some as recieved
    da love is how self please
    poetically sprayed cross da page
    thank u brutha amazed
    wow!!!
    keepin' it real
     
  7. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You grave all of us.
    You must continue the work you were called her to do.
    Your style is so sweet and profound.
    Be reading your work sis.
    Let me introduce myself, ShawnsWife.
    Author of all incorporations of vibe.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are absolutely fabulously loved!

    Fantastical wonderment you set the pages a fire with life...
    speaking and sometimes preaching on love,woes and strife.
    But you always , always on time with a positive state of mind.
    You help the anally retentive Type A personalities take pause and unwind. You are absolutely fabulously loved and I am always diggin yo vibe!

    Blessings On Ya House!

    Smooches sweetness!:kiss:
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u keep it comin,
    like a mighty strong wind.
    everything u said,
    was perfec--great message to send.
    so many folk,
    so caught up in the game.
    that they forget to thank the replee's,
    but u spelt out every name.
    so u gon head,
    and keep up the scribin'.
    and i'll make sure,
    to do the replyin'.............(that was like WHOA!)
     
  10. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your beauty is remarkable,
    Your faith is strong and reliable,
    Your love for us and poetry
    Is more than untouchable,
    And your spirit is just simply LOVEABLE!!!

    I'm feeling ya flow mann,
    I sop up ya words like collard greens wit hot sauce.

    you know how to fill the world up with more
    'ables' and less 'isms'!!! CHEERS TO YOU BABE!!!
     
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