Quiet Poetry Lounge : Love Lost

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, May 3, 2001.

  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    REASON

    LOVE CIRCLE RUNS THAT WAY!
    LOVE COMES & LOVE GOES
    WHERE IT STOP NOBODY KNOWS

    YET LOVE IS TO STAY
    IT PLAYS WIT YA MIND
    IT ALSO LAY IN YA HEART
    TO LOVE ANOTHER THE WAY U LOVE HER
    IS TO LOVE AS U DO .....
    TO LOSE A LOVE IS TO GAIN A NEWLY FOUND LOVE
     
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    december to may.....

    interesting reversal; and very touching....

    '...always snow in may'....wow Reason. Powerful feelings here.

    Thank you for sharing and welcome back

    A
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas

    you know I got some xtra tissue I haven't used yet. Come on ova and we can talk this here out. Believe me when I say I fell you . Truly heartfelt poet.



    One
     
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    REAS

    "if the flowers bloomed in december
    and the snow fell in may"...


    That's the lick ...! Nicely put Reason!!

    Lovin' the SoulurN2 ~ :wink:
     
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    i love love. u jus gotta believe that it can last a long time. i dig this flow.
    *baby PLEASE don't go-o-o-o-o-o... :)*
    -7
     
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    Awwww...

    ...what a piece, Reas! Melancholy, yet, exuding so much :heart: (heart), and :love: (love). You know that I am *lovin' this, completely*...
     
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    Reas My Brotha!!!!

    Stirrin' back in da mix with a sad but true life flow!!!

    Missed ya brotha!!!! Stay a lil while cause imma be gone in a minute for a minute...

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Deep in thought is where this verse makes one go, nice flow.

    Thanks for the read
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wind beneath my poetic wings....

    even in sadness... you are brilliantly tyght!

    i am lovin' dis piece/peace as i love errythang you do!

    LuvU4Life.
    SunShyne~
     
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