Black Poetry : Love Like Dat

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by abstract219, May 10, 2007.

  1. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    ,,,I
     
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    Surprise, surprise...cause I'm feeling you to,
    I slowed my roll, just to talk to you.

    My sign just happens to be the scales,
    It matches with your's from what I could tell.

    Yeah, I make 6 digits and circled the world,
    yet I'm willing and ready ...to be your girl.

    If ya clothes don't fit...I'll buy you some more,
    I'll dress you up and down to the core.

    Cause I found in you, what the others do lack
    of not being a playa, a pimp or a mack!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man scribe on i can relate to dis
     
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    What may seem to you like it's not good enough, could be top of the line to her. Descriptions of gold vary. As always, this was a well written piece, and it had a genuine quality that I loved.
     
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    Wow abstract, I digg the poetic comeback. WB, and I truly enjoyed reading this piece. Sensually smooth with the perfect jazzy twist:spinstar:

    :tennis:

    :picture:
     
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    abstract:

    If she's not smart enough to see
    that you are one special human being
    breaking concrete is fine with me
    I bet your back is as strong as can be
    What looks like trash is another persons
    treasure she sounds like a temporary fix
    not a sista that will be around 4EVER
    .

    I'm sorry I couldn't
    help it, I had to get my flo on like Queen.
    Queen always has the tyte flo back.
    Your joint was so sweet and endearing.
    She better recognize.

    Much Luv
     
  7. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    wow...the flowbacks on this was tight...great options, great add-ons and finishes

    Queen, thanx...i guess your piece makes this a collabo...LOL..tight.
    Spicy....thank you...it's good to be back here after being away a bit
    Watz....you know how we vibe...i thank you for your support.
    4ever....thank you...that is the perfect ending to this...that is truth
    RICH......great to be back in the presence of The Master...LOL..thank you.
     
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