Black Poetry : Love Letters/Tantalized

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  1. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what's up how you do? i missed hearing from you
    am i sweating too hard? i know it's hot
    but maybe what i'm spitting is really not
    the queen don't bow down to none but one
    may find a place in the heart the mind for
    communication mutual stimulation erotic exotic
    too heavy? i'm sorry
    but ordinary just won't do
    i need a bond that's strong and true
    you lift me up don't let me down
    sometimes just the sound of one tear dropping
    can change the way i spend my day
    you see the truth is not too far we can meet
    maybe greet halfway- what you say?
    not today
    you let me know if maybe i should go
    the distance between two points the
    shortest cause honest i'm curious
    no ties to bind let's sip the wine of
    eternity's blessing motivation?
    undressing the most intimate part you hide behind
    the spaces between your sounds when
    i'm not around
    or near is it fear that hesitates or
    am i reading between the lines
    that aren't even there
    at this point i really don't care
    i hope i made you smile at least for once in a while
    i don't give 21 answers just questions
    like
    how you spend your nights when the rains a tattoo
    how you hold your head up when you feel you're going through
    a desert storm
    can you throw bones, play spades, just chill at home
    like a sunday afternoon barbecue? do you talk in your sleep
    do you ever feel weak? can i make you strong
    like the king i know you to be
    even he laid his head on his mother's
    breast once upon a time to rest
    can you hear my dreams imagine the
    way i use to be and wish i didn't
    have to remember too many decembers of cold
    i know i' m an old soul
    maybe i digress
    become too intense
    ignore the passions you don't recognize
    just remember i'm tantalized
    by the thought of..... :flirt
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this! u read my mind!
     
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    BBF(Blaquebutterfli). I think I already like you just for your name, and that you too are a dreamer. Lovin your expressions and your motiv-OVATIONS...yeah

    dreamweaver*feelin*BBF*
    Lets dream up a storm

    The Dreamer...
     
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    Welcome Blaquebutterfli... that tantalized game is kickin'!
     
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    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for all the positive vibes. I feel truly welcome>
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet piece tyte flowin'
     
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    Bring it GURL!!!! KILLA FLOW RIGHT HERE!!!
     
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    I loved the format and the flow of this! It's like a stream of consciousness love letter.

    Like, "Can you dig it?" "Can you handle this?" "Can you git wit me?" "Feel me?"


    Well, that's what I got, anyway. :)


    Great piece. I enjoyed it immensely!
     
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