Black Poetry : Love Letter

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  1. afroprincess

    afroprincess Active Member MEMBER

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    Love Letter
    By: Afroprincess

    Every little bitty thing
    In every little bitty way
    You make my world so much better

    I’ll be your queen, if you’ll be my king
    There’s something special in everything you say
    You make my day so much brighter
    Here’s from me to you: my love letter

    Late at night when I’m dreaming of our life together
    I pray that you will know my love is true
    This is my love letter, to make sure you do

    When I think of the children we’ll someday have
    And the laughter we’ll someday laugh
    It somehow makes all the pain more
    Bearable because I know that someday pleasure will come at last

    I believe that love in the spiritual
    Is just as important as our love in the physical

    I want you to feed my mind with the knowledge you possess
    Use your love to caress the hurt away
    Convince me with passion to stay

    With your lips explore my beliefs
    Know that what you get from me is more than your eyes can see
    Feel how our love flows and comes together at once

    Move your heart to the strongest part of me
    All it’s going to take is a little pressure
    To release the pleasure

    Then there will be proof that:

    Every little bitty thing
    In every little bitty way
    You’ve made my world so much better

    You’ve made my days so much brighter
    I’m your queen and I know that you’re my king

    Here’s from me to you
    And from you to me, too
    Our long sweet love letter

    ***I've been told that this poem is a bit cliche but it's exactly how I was feeling at the moment. I hop[e that you all like it as much as I do.***
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You dropped a bomb on him, that's real and pure love...
    good piece poet.
     
  3. Ikoro

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    Whoa. This was one -not- your average love poem... Excuse me, but I simply must:

    Every little bitty thing,
    To the largest part of my life.
    You turned this prince to a king,
    And made joy from strife.

    I read your love letter,
    With passion and laughter...
    Thank you for sharing -
    I'll treasure it hereafter.

    You write very orderly (I love that!), and it put a smile on my face.

    So cute, thank you for sharing Afro_Princess, loved all I've seen so far. Can't wait to see more.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    Your poem was beautiful afroprincess. That's the way poetry is supposed to be; unrehearsed; from the heart; and real. Some lucky fellow will appreciate this:spinstar:

    :welldone:

    :picture:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was simply beautiful and warm surely he love reading this .
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Princess this was honest love, and honest love is rare you have a gift this was truly beautiful.

    Sweettee, love
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so,so.beautiful.
     
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    "I believe that love in the spiritual
    Is just as important as our love in the physical" - Afroprincess


    A true and beautiful sentiment, poet.
     
  9. afroprincess

    afroprincess Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you...

    I've said it before and I'll say it again it's really good to see your work appreciated.
     
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    lovely just lovely
     
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