Black Poetry : Love Letta

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Felt like flowin yall....so here I go....



    Sweet yet seductive
    Luscious yet lovely
    I look at you and see all of the world's beauty
    Contained within thee
    Nothing about you can be
    Classified as merely sexy
    I look in your eyes
    And wonder who ever had the
    Audacity
    To break your heart
    Who could have hurt you
    In any way from the start
    Who could have denied you
    Any of life's pleasures
    Who could have been so ignorant
    As not to treasure
    Your warm heart, your eyes
    And your sunlit smile
    Who couldn't have felt the need
    To make your time worthwhile
    Who couldn't have appreciated
    Your cocoa butter skin
    Or every strand of long hair, or
    Every thing within
    You that my pen
    Has not the honor to describe
    Every melodic vibe
    That slides
    Through my heart and mind
    Every time you take your time
    To grace my space
    Or to place your sugar laced
    Honey dew melon on my face
    (oops did I say that) :lol:
    I swear with you boo I
    Don't quite know how to act
    Because you bring out
    All of my essence within
    Regardless of what you say or do
    I find myself reflected within you
    You made me realize
    That the only demise
    Which will doom is with love i am constantly fightin
    (I mean look at da cheesy things you got me writin!)
    So I let you conquer
    My stubborn yet seduced soul
    There are not enough adjectives in the world to withhold
    Every single quality that creates you, lady
    And I find myself honored to say dat you're my baby.

    WHEW! I'm tired. So I'm stoppin here. But if any 1 wants to jump on it or show me some love, you're more than welcome to!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    from every heart is love
    and where the notion
    u fine the joy of emotions
    flowin in the wind of grace
    and see da look to the face
    da beauty of gentleness
    sweeps me off my feet
    i sit here in da comfort
    of thoughts when i think
    of u and know we are a whole
    let me not fall by the waste side
    but rise to the top of reasons
    and love and be loved
    whewwwwwwwwwwww!!!!

    passing it on !
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful and your words touch the heart master of love.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot :) hot :) hot :) caliente :)
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Play
    this is so
    Hot indeed
    Wonderful
    Peace
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the letta of love
    sounds like
    it was sent from above...lovely scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$....hot flow fa sho!!! Check the thread to see if anyone else shows a lil more skillz!!

    ASHANTA...thank you boo, i am much obliged!

    triniti.....i'm glad that you're feelin me!!! you know i'm tryna be like you boo n bring da heat!!!

    blue...thanks sistah!!! i appreciate your time!!!

    khasm....thank you!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tyte!!!!:hot:
     
  9. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    I love it, I love it, I love it!
     
  10. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: Play...you know I'm lovin everything you write. Honey dew melon on your face huh. :laugh: You crazy gurl! Much love.
     
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