Black Poetry : LOVE KILLS? Ayy So'ja..u inspired me...Peep this

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  1. BLASTHEME

    BLASTHEME Active Member MEMBER

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    Here we go..off tha top..625pm 12-07-08 Finished 6:54pm

    She whispered eternal love as she called out his name
    He couldn't resist, her eyes bright like flames
    She said the world was his, an he could have it for life
    He was hers, and she was his wife
    No longer a need for the knife from the strife
    Depressed from deep stress, tryn'a out from this life
    She said there's a better way, an we can see some better days
    Stretched his arms out toward her like he was givin' praise
    Held her in his arms an said phuq tha world like pac
    Kissed her gently the first time an felt all his troubles drop
    Thinking to his self, this is that true love that I been missin'
    No hugs from dad, and mom didn't like kissin'
    First girlfriend named Lateisha, sexually abused by her father
    She was strung out on H til somebody raped, murdered an robbed her
    High school dropout?, he didn't make it to tha 7th
    Gittin' money was his passion, best customer was uh reverend
    Rev'z wife was uh decent woman, christian values at best
    That's what was thought until she flashed him her breast
    Test of the spirit an tha flesh this man lost it
    Tha p was in his face like rev'z wife had straight tossed it
    Affair lasted in all for about 3 weeks
    Til rev got tha word from 3 local computer geeks
    Intercepted some texts sent from her to his cell-phone
    Rev bought him uh gun, intentions, sendin' her tha hell-home
    Rev bought uh bottle uh gin an drank it half down
    Mad as hell and drunk as ish, he started ta laugh now
    Stumblin an mutterin about some ish that was on his mind
    Thought about his gun an relaxed his hand upon his 9
    Entered his crib not sayin sheit but just shot twice
    Didnt see tha cigarette in her hand, they both lost their life

    Memories and more expanded as he kissed her lips
    Brought back to the present wonderin' "What kinda life is this?"
    The paper said Rev an his wife died together, as house caught on fire
    Whoever said "Love Kills" really wasn't no kind'a liar
    But that was back then, and now is now
    She said relax an kiss me again as he fell to the ground


    Git it? nope! You don't...lemme help u out.......the woman he was now in love with was named Crystal aka CRACK...he kissed her lips...the tip of the pipe......................shhhhhhh an don't bite either...lmao.......itz ya man again!! Peace


    BLAS




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    We Have To Cure The Ill In This
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was in deed dope, in a good way that is :lol:
    it's so very true, that white girl become ya one and only GOD!
    I enjoyed the read poet.
     
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    wow.....ya pen is hot !! flow head on poet
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was vurry hot Blas! Im glad you did that lil bit of explainin' at the end, cas I can be a lil slow.....he he he! :thinking:

    I did enjoy this flow....very creative!
     
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    yes yes brethren

    i know the story all too well

    and you captured "that" here

    but i'm lost

    how did i inspired you?:?::thinking::help:
     
  6. BLASTHEME

    BLASTHEME Active Member MEMBER

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    ayy yo so'ja

    u inspired me wit'cha piece str8 wit da y because it all real n i felt like flowin wit'cha on it..too bad 2 cant be on at tha same time in tha poetry throwdown on friday cuz i'd luv ta git down wit'chu on some real ish back 2 back like tha ol skool...lol...smile............peace

    BLAS
     
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