Black Poetry : Love Just Right

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I propose to you, my feminine jewel,
    this small part of me as a symbolic
    gesture to quiet your search for a
    love just right

    for it is over…

    The perfect man to love is here

    As long as I’ve yearned to love, it
    is with alluring tongue that I teach
    the ways of reciprocal love

    Tender is your caress upon my
    mental satisfaction; with piercing
    eyes the hue of your lovely
    complexion

    Inquisitively I wonder if I am destined
    to be her faithful lover; and she my
    own; but only in charming mutual accord

    If she commands of me, I am there to answer,
    but if I fall while in pursuit of this kismet
    quest, I shall surely rise with the strength
    of love; as she awaits my ascent as vowed

    Hence accept, my love, from my heart of hearts;
    and listen closely to my fervent eruption of
    emotional outcries; in affectionate testimony
    that one perfection sought is now twice personified...

    ©GQINC2K3​
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gq,

    this is smooth brother. don't hurt 'em.
     
  3. Bishop

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    GQ!!! Man they lining up at your door son!!!
     
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    great post keep it up
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Q ya bout to set a fire round here!
    TYGHT
     
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