Black Poetry : Love JOYnts (puff session II...da blunt)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (inhale)

    pumping and
    pumping
    and oil and lotion
    and sweat and fatigue
    and clinched muscles
    [i'm tired of being a slave to
    Mastur Bates]

    --give me free---

    (hold)

    you got me proverbially
    "hooked, lined, and sinkered'
    i can't tinker no more with my own toy
    i need you to "get on back
    here"...and get on your back
    or your hands and knees or
    straddle my hips or lay on your side
    or dammit just kiss him a little bit.
    i was doing okay that is OK
    until you "threw it on me"
    and I wanted to throw it back but it felt to
    **** good how you whittled my wood
    'til it shined brightly...baby your
    love is smoother than shea butter...
    i promise to go downtown and stay
    a while...i'll shop for moans
    and nails in my back and pearls...
    and...(**** I love them pearls)
    but I will go there...where I know
    that lost world of fantastic is.
    your lips whispered to me the other
    day while I was just being...said she
    wanted to talk a little bit, see if my bite
    was as good as my bark, maybe after dark
    so we can hide in the shadows and
    "relate"
    i just wanted my tongue to run free
    ...it had been a virgin so long...and
    you were my first...you created this thirst
    and my development ain't arrested but
    "I am still thirsty"

    (hold)

    after you maximize yourself
    and minor and major are ripe and of pomegranite
    hue I want you to let your
    feet become dancefloors to moon
    glances and let me know what your
    knees are saying in it's native
    tongue while i...touch you into
    the morning and exercise
    my rhomboids and latissimus dorsi
    and hip flexors...love is a workout baby...
    hold/relax

    (exhale)

    (c)2003 blakverb
     
  2. ladye

    ladye Active Member MEMBER

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    :eek: :kiss: :D :D ;) :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: ****,i can't breath. nice black as always
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is :hot: wooooweeee!!!
     
  4. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    garrison.


    mmm mmm mmm... you so nastee! :lol:

    i will refrain from posting my 1st thoughts...
    ...i'll just say... you gotta do a spoken version
    of this one. we deserve it!!! :D

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome creation Blak!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and Kem thought part 1 was bordering on erotic....

    I'm with Elayne, I won't actually say what I first thought when reading this...but I will say WOW!!!!

    K
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now you done went and did it!

    Now you know that one was straight up Eroticisim....least by my book...hell you got me hooked, and brown paper bagging this one all the way home....umph! You just up and went there...two times...What ever shall I do with you????????????:hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :eeek: :eeek: :eeek: :eeek: :tongue: :tongue:
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam for the love. i know this one is eroticism, but, love and eroticism are so intimately connected it's hard sometimes to write one without thinking of the other.
     
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